Due to the feedback that my piece was too busy I experimented with positioning of the 'fantasy' parts of the picture. I decided to have most of the flowers etc on one side of Cesca and the writing of the piece on the other side. I also made the font so that it wasn't overlapping Cescas body as this made it clearer to read. In doing this I think the piece benefitted massively as it was clearer to look at, but still included the busy sections, the only difference was that they are all in an actual section rather than dotted all over the picture.
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