Narrative of the piece

I wanted to experiment with the narrative structure of my piece to make it slightly more interesting. I incorporated the use of flashbacks to show different, contrasting experiences that the girl had, before and after, she gained her confidence. The piece starts with her in real time in her bedroom, then as she is explaining about how bad life can be there is a flashback to her tripping up/falling over which symbolises how she feels about her life. Then it flashes back to her in normal time and there is a change of night to day. When she wakes up in the morning all her troubles are gone and the rest of the piece goes on to show how she grows and is happy with her life again. The scene that she saw herself in of her falling over is replicated again but happy and she also stops herself from tripping up. I feel that this is a good way to show the contrast between the two sections of the piece.